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I don't call her Evil for nothing. I wonder how Zak's going to get out of that one...

Wow! things just got hot in the jungle!!

Well written, Ryalin. Veronica running through the jungle, Marguerite and Roxton 'trapped', Challenger overstepping and Malone snoozing - why it's just like old times!

I'm enjoying this story very much.

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Just wonderful!
I was thrilled. Exciting chapter again. The story keeps its tension. Great job

Yes, Ry keeps throwing curveballs. Round 9 is now available here. Enjoy!

This chapter gave vivid pictures like I was watching TLW on TV!
My heart reaced!

You guys write amazingly well! It's like watching another TLW episode on TV! Thursday is suddenly the most anticipated day of the week!

Wow, excellent chapter. Looks like "The Nothing" and Olmec are related. Scary.

I could praise the two of you for your skill in writing and your understanding of the characters, but what keeps coming to me as I read - this is one nail-bitingly good story. It's just so satisfying on every level.
Thanks

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*A ripple passes through the forums, and Zakiyah and DNash appear, sitting at a strangely-familiar bistro table, sipping lattes*

Z: Interesting. I hadn't thought to be back here again, not like this anyway.

D: Nope. It's quite out of continuity. Do you think anyone will notice?

Z: *snorts* Who's to notice?

D: There is that. But perhaps you should make an obvious announcement, just in case.

Z: *grumbles* Oh, all right. While I don't think our readers would be all that confused, you certainly earned a good intro.

D: *toasts the air with her latte* Damn right I did. I always do.

Z: Hit it.



D: Nice!

Z: I thought you'd like that.

D: What's CISP, though? Isn't it RISP - runners in scoring position?

Z: If we were playing baseball, sure. But we're playing round-robin, and that's characters in scoring position.

D: *snickers into her latte and gets foam on her nose*

Z: So that's that. You about done here?

D: Just about. My latte's nearly gone, and there's not much else to keep me here.

Z: Me too. That's all for this week, folks. See you next Thursday!

*Another ripple passes through the forum, and Zakiyah and DNash vanish, taking the bistro table with them*

Nicely done DNash! How is Ry or Zak going to get out of this one?

I could feel the tense atmosphere throughout the chapter.
Great job again!
Mmm...how many chapters until the end of the story?
I want to read conclusion but I don't want to end the good Thursdays

Thanks, sunkrux and marimari. Glad you enjoyed it! I had great fun "pinch-hitting" on this fic.

Thanks all! We're glad to hear you're enjoying the story, and that it reminds you so much of an episode. Hang on to your fingernails, because Round 11 is now up and ready for your reading pleasure. I had to swing at the fastball sinker DNash threw at me - you be the judge as to whether I swung and missed, or hit it out of the park.

See you next week!

Oh My...I think you totally smacked way, way, way out of the park. Awesome! Omg, poor Marguerite.

The worst experience! Exactly the worst nightmare
I thought, so if there were the season 4, according to Judy & Gar, Marguerite would have horrible experience like this; she would have to take the most difficult choice for her. Poor Marguerite.